Angel of Death

I really loved this, you know it almost had me to tears. I didn't see any errors, but if there were it really wouldn't take away from this beautiful piece ...

Yeah I agree. I just need some time to think about it though. I have an idea to make it more clear...but I don't know yet.

I know that it doesn't sound like much, but this was just an idea I had running around in my head all day. Don't you just hate when that happens?

Thanks for the advice everyone who reads and critiques!!!

I loved this song a lot, and even though it had some what!!! A song is from the heart, like poetry, so made up or misspelled words are okay. Also ...

I thought this had a lot of imagery, but it was too short and I want more. If this was a poem it didn't much qualities that a poem should ...

I thought Vortex was a very sad person but she knew what she had to do. I really hope she meets new people and I can't wait to read what ...